Torresrevisionsheet

(what you wrote) || Revision (how it changed after feedback) || Explanation/Rule (catchy way to remember next time) ||
 * Original
 * Genre# 1 ||  ||   ||
 * I was interested... || I have been interested || "Have been" because I still interested. ||
 * as well other's || as well as others || the first one is possessive and I wanted it plural. ||  ||
 * would || will || Because it is future not past. ||
 * and leads me to.. || and lead me to || It should be in the past because it already happened ||
 * Genre # 2 ||  ||   ||
 * The pictures were not well organized || I organized the boxes and pictures || It look more professional and neat ||
 * been away... || being away || Its present ||
 * self-confident || self confidence || misspelling ||
 * knowledge and understanding || understanding || They have the same definition ||
 * multi cultural || multi-cultural || they are compound adjectives and they should be hyphenate. ||  ||
 * Genre # 3 ||  ||   ||   ||
 * few pictures and text || Provide more pictures and information || This is a magazine ad and the page should have more pictures and text that can capture the reader. ||
 * Genre #4 ||  ||   ||